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Comments in red. A cry of surprised pain was almost drowned out by the crack of a gunshot. This isn't as dramatic as I imagine you were hoping. There is ...

Comments in red! The night kisses our old fears and desires, welcoming them home. The radio on the bed played Top 40 and Danae sang along, though she didn’t know ...

Hello and welcome! This is a great forum, and a fantastic place for writers. You've obviously already read the rules, which everyone will appreciate, so you're off to a good ...

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Hi Jamie! Supernatural is always fun! I'll get right on it. I should finish some time this evening. Avens

Thank you, everyone! Avens

Hi Hollie! Welcome to YWS. Here's a link to the rules and a couple of guides/FAQs: If they don't answer all of your questions, feel free to PM (Private Message) ...

Hi Rowan! I'm in Fantasy, so I'd be happy to help out in any way I can. Let me know if you ever need a critique! Jared's already covered the ...

Well if my husband were as, shall we say, promiscuous as Zeus was, I'd probably be spiteful too. :) What about the Danaides? 49 of them killed their husbands under ...

Nice to meet you Lydia! I'm supremely jealous of your rabbit. A friend and I were bored today so we went to a pet shop nearby and just walked around. ...

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"He fell asleep" ;) Because this is postmodern literacy, the following pages shall be blank. Dear reader, please fill in the blank. Is it sad that I can totally imagine ...

Sounds like adventure novels for young adults, likely with ties to the Romance genre. I see a blonde damsel-in-distress character in her mid-twenties. Her rescuer is also blond, and is ...

I'll just post a description, then? Tall and slender male with dark hair. Dresses well. Has some sort of facial disfigurement or tic which he is self-conscious about. Falls in ...